Tuesday, April 10, 2012

I

Today's the day you came
and joined in oneness with the whole
you were christened with a name
but more importantly, a soul.

9 comments:

The Golden Eagle said...

Interesting poem!


The Golden Eagle
The Eagle's Aerial Perspective

Pat Hatt said...

Birth I take it to be
Which is how all come to their sea
Whether or not that soul
Is good or evil depends on lifes stroll

Melissa Sugar said...

Beautiful poem. I have a very vivid image in my mind of a baby dressed in a gorgeous white christening gown being held by a priest, surrounded by family. I see the holy water placed on the baby's head followed by a cry and smiles of joy from everyone watching. It is a proud moment and the parents can now feel safe that their child's soul belongs to god.

Old Ollie said...

amen!

Lynn Proctor said...

so sweet love it!

Timothy Brannan said...

I like it!

My appreciation of poetry is very pedestrian. I know what I like but I have no idea why. ;)

I am trying to read all the A to Z blogs, but coming back to the ones I really like.
Looking forward to seeing what you do all month!

Tim
The Other Side
The Freedom of Nonbelief

Damyanti said...

That's a lovely poem.

Hope you’re enjoying the challenge so far.


--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012

Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge

Shirley Allard said...

Hey Bob,

Great use and timing for the letter I. Hoping you had a Happy Birthday. ;)

Shirl

rch said...

Thanks a lot!!