Monday, April 02, 2012


How wired can we get?

Will we even go in debt
to get our fatal fix,
to feel those harsh electrons jet
and virtually mix
with all the bloody tears and sweat
that tangle up our ticks
like unresolved regret?
C’mon, just for kicks
let’s populate the net!

How wired can we get?


Lynn Proctor said...

wish i had started a new blog for poetry i may---you have inspired me!

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...


Sometimes, all sense evaporates and we just give in to the temptations, so easily and readily placed in front of us.
The Web provides a comfort zone, but with a bite (byte)!!!!

Best wishes,

Pa Ul said...

What a lovely Poem, its not average its great as is for B.
Do check my B too at GAC a-z

Tara Tyler said...

and thought provoking!

Maria said...

'that tangle up our ticks like unresolved regret?'
How wired up can we get indeed.

I'm inspired.

Pat Hatt said...

Yeah wired to the hilt
As many refuse to even tilt
Making real life seem strange
Doubt it's going to change

Scarlet said...

Once you get hooked, its addicting ~

Brother Ollie said...

you are a lyrical master

rch said...

Thanks for these awesome comments!!