How wired can we get?
Will we even go in debt
to get our fatal fix,
to feel those harsh electrons jet
and virtually mix
with all the bloody tears and sweat
that tangle up our ticks
like unresolved regret?
C’mon, just for kicks
let’s populate the net!
How wired can we get?
Are You Reading Me?
9 comments:
wish i had started a new blog for poetry i may---you have inspired me!
Bob,
Sometimes, all sense evaporates and we just give in to the temptations, so easily and readily placed in front of us.
The Web provides a comfort zone, but with a bite (byte)!!!!
Best wishes,
Eileen
What a lovely Poem, its not average its great as is for B.
Do check my B too at GAC a-z
cool!
and thought provoking!
'that tangle up our ticks like unresolved regret?'
How wired up can we get indeed.
I'm inspired.
Yeah wired to the hilt
As many refuse to even tilt
Making real life seem strange
Doubt it's going to change
Once you get hooked, its addicting ~
you are a lyrical master
Thanks for these awesome comments!!
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