Friday, July 30, 2010


The swollen river limped along
while I just sat there helpless
without a crutch or river song
to even out its cadence

it passed me by quite sluggishly
intent on keeping current
and stayed its course pugnaciously
despite this dumb deterrent.


Lisa Ursu said...

That is a marvelous poem.

Paul Andrew Russell said...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Great writing!

rch said...

Wow thanks a lot Liza and Paul, I reallly appreciate your kind words.

Fenny said...

enjoyed reading here ... this one is great!