A worthy question, I think... perhaps you could expand this and give us the answer? But, even if left rhetorical, and we're abandoned to our own devices, it needs to be posed.
I like the rhythm and the manner in which it cuts to the chase. Plus, the pace is so consistent throughout, it almost sounds like a song.
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A worthy question, I think... perhaps you could expand this and give us the answer? But, even if left rhetorical, and we're abandoned to our own devices, it needs to be posed.
I like the rhythm and the manner in which it cuts to the chase. Plus, the pace is so consistent throughout, it almost sounds like a song.
Nicely done.
me thinks it would be neat
if both head and heart could eat
but where indeed to find
food for heart and mind
What I first grasped was your double take on the title. I also agree with Bob...perhaps you should consider writing songs. ;)
Hey bub, thanks man, that's how I started really, with songs.
Hi Oz, I love it!!
Hello Shirley, I'm working on it, don't worry I'll send you a copy as soon as it's done ;)
Robert, check out http://poeticjustice-dan.blogspot.com/ He's extended "Fare"... a nice tribute to you, I think.
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