Friday, May 17, 2013


In a discriminating age
is there age discrimination
or an all-consuming rage
is there raging consummation
once they demonstrate their wage
can you wage a demonstration
if you dominate the stage
will it stage a domination?


Donna Smith said...

Okay, your poems always make me think.
And this is what I am thinking now:

Though they answer questions uttered,
Do we question answers muttered?

I'm sorry, it isn't up to par with yours, but it was fun to play with! I may use it in a poem at some later time. It's making me think some more.

rch said...

Haha Donna, good one! When the opening lines came to me I was like - ok where's this going? Words are so much fun :-D