Sunday, November 20, 2011

Breakers

The ocean gnaws the shore
I bite back with my oar
a turbulent tug-of-war
as is the tide.

My valiant vessel braves
the brunt of warrior waves
though billions in their graves
already tried.

Upon our fluid fronts
the flow of battle stunts
advancement for the grunts
that die denied.

4 comments:

Old Ollie said...

very cool theme - we all gotta ride out the breakers

rch said...

thanks double O, surf's up

becca givens said...

I enjoyed the word imagery you used ... I am mesmerized by the ebb and flow from the shore! Well done!

rch said...

Thanks becca!