Monday, June 28, 2010

Reform


I saw something thrive in cement
it was quite a reinforcing event;
akin to a rose
with it’s own lovely scent
it proved there’s a flaw
in this unbending gent
providing enough of a dent
to find if life is meant
to sparkle, or be spent
(though it seems there’s nothing it can’t circumvent).

4 comments:

Carrie Burtt said...

Awesome poem with a perfect photo.
Love it! :-)

Robert Lloyd said...

This was a great poem with such a positive message wrapped up in it. Great work!!

rch said...

Hi Carrie, thanks I was just disagreeing with myself ;)

Hey Robb, thanks a lot.

Dimps said...

Hello Bob,

I really was busy with work and missed your compositions soooooooo much!!
And after readin this one... I was so delighted... positive message, nice picture and great verbiage.
Wow!

Loads of love...
Regards,
Dimps