Thursday, October 18, 2012

God's Gift to Women

You're sure you have the ladies wowed
with all your lame old lies
so unaware how they're endowed
with hearts that compromise.

11 comments:

Alissa Meredith Jill Osborn Schapiro said...

compact,

powerful words.

Anonymous said...

compromise is a good thing.

Anonymous said...

yea. most believe it is a good thing. here's my rally.. https://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/

Brother Ollie said...

this is a fine chorus

Lexi Woods said...

love the brief lines and memo.

Abbey Michael Boyle Blount Fallin said...

love the word flow.

rch said...

Thanks a lot!

Bing Yap said...

"God's gift to women"... or so they thought. well done!

Anonymous said...

witty and deep.

Anonymous said...

lovely.

Elizena said...

Sometimes compromise can be a good thing, if it's something that will eventually lead to good change in your life, but not all compromise is good, not if it makes you end up hating who you are.
Wow, this really made me use my brain and search my feelings. Very well done. Thanks so much for sharing. Have a blessed day.

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/10/fighting-demons.html