Wednesday, April 09, 2014


Cut too deep
a scar is all you'll reap
your unproductive toils
in a lumpy jagged heap

sow too soon
and you won't have to prune
your estimate of spoils
as arid as a dune.


Kim Graff said...

I really love your poem. Especially the first two lines, they are so powerful.

~ Kim Graff

Liz said...

Brill! I wouldn't say that is average at all!

From one poet to another -

Liz (A-Z) (website)

Cathrina Constantine said...

Nice, very nice!

rch said...

Thanks a lot Kim, liz, and cathrina!