Monday, February 18, 2008

Stinker

At the peak
of a week
without bathing
the reek
will be scathing

so

frequently scrub
in the tub
or they’ll name you
a grub
and defame you.

10 comments:

Shirley said...

Ha! It's pretty bad when you have to tell the little stinker that they're a little stinky!

Bubba said...

I hate it when that happens...

rch said...

§orry I know it's a stinker, but this one was stuck in my brain.

Anonymous said...

a bit lengthy, but, I couldn't help it: I liked it. Mary from Meander With Me Average Poet? What's wrong with that? Takes one to know one?

http://maryakaufman.wordpress.com

noahthegreat said...

It's better to hear that you stink from a friend than someone you admire!

I hate when that happens.

I'm glad I smell good sans when I'm sick.

Gerald Galindez said...

i dont want to be defamed bob..
^_^

so ill overtime on the tub

ozymandiaz said...

If I were to go a week without bathing I would be lucky to be called a grub...
Very fun read.

rch said...

ha ha just having some good clean fun, awwww that was bad

ekhosama said...

dang, that was good. Where did u learn to write poetry?

rch said...

it's been a long road ekhosama, thanks a lot.