Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Unfit

Perpetual pursuit
of precepts that're moot
will only dangle sour fruit

resist the status quo
and suddenly you'll know
where unexpected pleasures grow.

8 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

In my youth, my movement was fear directed. As I grew older, healthier, happier, I learned to be travers and then prefer the road less traveled. Along that route we find our happiness and ourselves.

rch said...

Hey Kim, that's the only way to travel as far as I'm concerned, I actually wrote this for vetse first but haven't had a chance to post it there yet.

Mary said...

Always good at least to question the status quo, I think! That is the only way to bring about change.

In your comment, do you mean 'Verse First'? I think this is where you posted it. At least that is where I found it. Smiles.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Resisting the status quo is my mantra! Loved this!

alan1704 said...

Loved this, great truth in lovely words, well expressed. To see life through others perspectives is enriching and a gift.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Interesting rhymes.

rch said...

Hey everyone, thanks for your great comments, I stopped fitting in a long time ago, if I ever did at all.

Akila G said...

Deviation opening to new treasures..depends on the ability to take risk sans any strings attached! Away from the usual patterns!!