We're often chided and derided
for things that we've decided
but choices are like voices
heed the chorus that rejoices
when yesterday becomes today
tomorrow isn't far away
be confident and circumvent
the problems that you can't prevent
illusion and confusion
can be deadly in collusion
let your vision spurn derision
and defend your own decision.
8 comments:
Bob,
This poem is absolutely superb. It actually appealed to me with its prayerful words of wisdom.
Best Wishes,
Eileen
you have lyrical skill in spades
wise words too rch
Yes... always defend your decision...
Only it's not that easy - and neither is writing like this, as I know only too well. Congratulations.
I love the this! It almost sounds like a rap song. Love the beat and ryhmn of it, and also the message is clear.
I love the this! It almost sounds like a rap song. Love the beat and ryhmn of it, and also the message is clear.
It DOES sound like a poetry slam kinda poem. Lotsa work in there!!
Hey thanks everyone!
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