A poet's pen has piercing Is
to penetrate the best disguise
and sometimes it's abuzz with Bs
that pollinate the fruitful trees,
judicious use of yearning Ys
can help explain the compromise
while conquest of uncharted Cs
may broaden what a seeker sees.
Are You Reading Me?
13 comments:
Very creative.. I like uncharted Cs~
Wishing you Happy New Year ~
Innumerable Ys and piercing Is.. so true .. a poet has the power to do anything, despite being helpless about anything..powerful words
Clever, witty and delightful. Have a great year.
sharp, enjoyed it.
;)
Love it!!! Hope you have a wonderful New Year Bob! :-)
Is and Bs and Ys and Cs and 22 other characters can give your writing character :^D - Thanks and Happy NY
OK, this was fun to read. Thank you for posting it! I am also a fan of the "uncharted Cs" - Can, Create, Convey, Color - Cs are great! Here's my offering this week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/drafting-the-clock-strikes-inspiration/ Happy Rally!
The pronunciation of the letters give this poem a playful tone, yet it is very serious. Really nice word play!
-Erick Flores
Love the rhythm of this. Clever as well - that first 'Is' caught me out!
cleverly done with wordplay….er, character play.
I like the metonymy used with ''Is'' (eyes), Bs (bees), Ys (whys), and Cs (sees)…cool.
So witty! Very nice.
brilliant capture of a poet's pen and how it impacts life.
Glad to see you join poets rally.
hope that you have enjoyed it.
see you next week.
Hey thanks it was fun and I still have to leave a few more comments to get my quota but we had two weeks so I figured I'd space them out a little.
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