Friday, October 28, 2011

Alluvion

I pledge
this wedge
will never hedge
my need
to bleed
that’s guaranteed
for I
comply
with no one’s lie
no stone
or moan
will ever postpone
what seems
like streams
of dormant dreams.

7 comments:

Monika said...

So loved it. The theme, the style, the words- perfect!

Kim Nelson said...

A lyrical piece illustrating your writer's determination.

Ella said...

Well Done, the last line is so beautiful~

zongrik said...

i like the wedge concept and how you are pledging not to have block. a lot to live up to.

Poetry and Icecream said...

This is awesome!!! I really enjoyed reading :)

Dave King said...

I can relate to this. Congratulations.

rch said...

Hi everybody, thanks for your kind words about my words :D