Thursday, August 05, 2010

Turnabout

I think of all I could have been
then look at what I am
remembering with sorrow when
I didn’t give a damn

so many people tried to help
though I just turned away
a cocky unrepentant whelp
determined not to pay,

and now I turn my pockets out
divulging all my shares
but like the me that used to pout
nobody really cares.

11 comments:

Carrie Burtt said...

Such true words, and such a hard but hopefull place...if we could only know then what we know now....I think this one is one of my favorites of your poetry. :-)

Jingle said...

lovely done,
we all do that,
things will improve if you, you make adjustment yourself.

;)

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:)

rch said...

Hi Carrie, yes hope is important (as implied by your blog title) thanks, I'm glad you like it :)

Hi Jingle, yes well self improvement is a never ending process so I'll just keep trying my best. I'll check it out ;)

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Dimps said...

"but like the me that used to pout
nobody really cares."

Simply fantastic...!
Good verbiage like always :)

Regards,
Dimps

rch said...

Hi Jingle thanks a lot!!

Hey Dimps, well I try to keep the verbiage consistent.

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Ritz.. said...

Best thing about it the person has realized and that is just about it :)

Realization and acceptance can clear the vision .. give you the courage to move forward... can enlightened the dark corners :)

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rch said...

Thanks Ritz, you are so right.