Saturday, August 14, 2010

Torch

Promethean pretenses prance
upon a plainly plebeian page
too delineated to deftly dance
or awaken an atomic age
irradiated beyond repair
by fallout from the flame affair.

4 comments:

Dimps said...

Hey :)

Howdy?? :)

Nice -- "too delineated to deftly dance"

Regards,
Dimps

rch said...

Howdy pard, thanks much ;)

Lynette Killam said...

Love the alliteration..very clever! And thanks for leaving your comment on my lion haiku...It started my day off with a grin, always a good thing!!

Lynette

rch said...

Hi Lynette, thanks you're the only one that commented on that aspect of it, I just love similar sounds :)