Friday, February 06, 2009

Finish

Some people label thoughts a poem
because they used a form
fastidiously fashioning the flanks
so perfectly it shines like chrome
and feels about as warm—
you can’t forge art by filling in the blanks.

3 comments:

Art and Poetry said...

nice one! I do like to use a form of poetry but you need free flowing words also.

Noah the Great said...

This one felt rather tense compared to your other poems. I don't know if it was just my mind stumbling, though.

rch said...

thanks guys

ps Noah I was having a bad day and was very tense when I wrote it.