Friday, February 06, 2009


Some people label thoughts a poem
because they used a form
fastidiously fashioning the flanks
so perfectly it shines like chrome
and feels about as warm—
you can’t forge art by filling in the blanks.


Art and Poetry said...

nice one! I do like to use a form of poetry but you need free flowing words also.

Noah the Great said...

This one felt rather tense compared to your other poems. I don't know if it was just my mind stumbling, though.

rch said...

thanks guys

ps Noah I was having a bad day and was very tense when I wrote it.