Monday, February 02, 2009

Luminosity

Like photons through a fractured pane
I suffer disarray
attempts at unity are vain
but still I shine away.

The darkness tries to dampen me
beneath its dim dismay
degrading my intensity
and still I shine away.

4 comments:

Noah the Great said...

I love the title and the poem inside. Good work booobbby. :P

Gerald Galindez said...

This is melancholic bob..
i like this line
"Like photons through a fractured pane
I suffer disarray"

very authentic..

take care pal..

rch said...

Thanks Nooooooooaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh ;)

Hi Gerald, yeah winter is starting to get to me, thanks.

Jo Janoski said...

The title pulled me in, too. If this is what cabin fever does to you, move to the South Pole because it works well for you, poetically speaking, of course.