Friday, January 17, 2014

Advancement?

Here we go again
another seeming chance
to alter circumstance
or patronize my pen

there I go once more
beginning something new
suspended halfway through
the yawning door.

3 comments:

Erica Maples said...

wow that's a very good poem i enjoyed reading it you are a very good poet

Donna Smith said...

When I first read this I read it in a "writing"context, what with pen and ally. And it makes a good case for that translations. But then I reread it and the title. Different meaning to "patronize my pen"! I love twining around one thought and then having to retreat and twine around another!

rch said...

Thanks alot Eric!

Hey Donna, my lack of time for writing has forced me to try and say as much as possible with as few words as possible so double meanings are a must ;-)