Thursday, October 18, 2012

God's Gift to Women

You're sure you have the ladies wowed
with all your lame old lies
so unaware how they're endowed
with hearts that compromise.

11 comments:

Alissa Daimakepeace Schapiro said...

compact,

powerful words.

Carolina Walker Myers said...

compromise is a good thing.

fiveloaf said...

yea. most believe it is a good thing. here's my rally.. https://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/

Old Ollie said...

this is a fine chorus

Lexi Woods said...

love the brief lines and memo.

Nataeven FairyAn Fallin said...

love the word flow.

rch said...

Thanks a lot!

Bing Yap said...

"God's gift to women"... or so they thought. well done!

Ihop Smith said...

witty and deep.

Madeline Neilton Jackson said...

lovely.

Elizena said...

Sometimes compromise can be a good thing, if it's something that will eventually lead to good change in your life, but not all compromise is good, not if it makes you end up hating who you are.
Wow, this really made me use my brain and search my feelings. Very well done. Thanks so much for sharing. Have a blessed day.

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/10/fighting-demons.html