It may be worth the dues
you pay for priceless fun
but now your body rues
that frolic in the sun
it's stiffer than a two by four
your knotted back all creaky-sore
each foot feels like a ton
or is that just your shoes
the days of youth are done
as entropy ensues
thank God that freakin' fair is here
for only seven days a year.
14 comments:
I laughed aloud at the last two lines. Until then, I thought you must have been watching me as the last few days of tree-trimming wrapped up. :-)
Haha... that would be ME too...LOL
nice - always dig your lyrics.
and..no hair shirts!
Last two lines REALLY made me smile.
Bob,
I was worried until I reached the last few lines...So tongue in cheek:)
A pleasant and uplifting ditty...
Eileen
Aahhh, those dues! Yes, the memories of endless fun and no tired feet...time has changed that view and path, lol
Fun to read~
Ha...ha...priceless fun ~ I enjoyed this ~
You pulled a "fast one" on this, you had me laughing....brilliant, as always.
I so enjoyed this.....I feel the same way about those "freaking fairs"......I dare not even ASK what a Motorola Droid is.....is that spam?????
LOL @Sherry.
This was such a fun read! I was already picturing in my head all the things this poor person suffered and was pleasantly surprised.
Decay a fact of life...you've gotta laugh.
Ha...ha...enjoyed...
but true about the freaking fairs...
HeHe I'm glad you like my sense of humor, all in all it was worth every ache 8^D
Very, very fun! and unfortunately, I can completely relate :-) Excellent take on the prompt
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