Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Relative

The bulk of the strife
beneath which I smother
was caused by another
I’ve met in this life

if it wasn’t for others
our lives would be calm
with just one qualm—
no sisters or brothers.

5 comments:

Lisa Ursu said...

I really felt this piece.
Thanks for sharing.

be not blind said...

Hmm, so true. Good work.

Carrie Van Horn said...

I can relate...:-)

rch said...

Hi Liza, you're welcome ;)

Hi bnb, where you been?

Hi Carrie, nice one :D

Dimple said...

Hello Bob,

Nice rhyming pattern!
Good work as well...

Regards,
Dimps