The river hugs the valley exploring every twist, engorged by all the passion of their long tempestuous tryst yet damned to watch the future eroding in the mist.
sometimes even we humans can feel as if we are simply watching the future unfold... that's what i love about poetry,, everyone can decide what meaning it holds for them....
in addition, i just want to let you know i am posting my new poetry on justpaisley.... now, and i sure would love it if you came over and had a look....
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Interesting! I like the way you've taken such a long journey with a minimal number of words. Well done.
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This says so much to me.
sometimes even we humans can feel as if we are simply watching the future unfold... that's what i love about poetry,, everyone can decide what meaning it holds for them....
in addition, i just want to let you know i am posting my new poetry on justpaisley.... now, and i sure would love it if you came over and had a look....
Loved this, its great.
Hope your well ;-D
Thanks a lot guys, don't have much time, I changed one word to increase the intimacy aspect.
Hey paisley got ya covered ;)
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