Wednesday, March 05, 2008

Cultured

Narcissus is certain
her helix ingrains
the rosiest tulips
the garden contains

but lily’s a lady
immune to the plot
who needs not belabor
the something she’s got.

7 comments:

noahthegreat said...

Intelligent use of vocabulary and a good message. Always a pleasure.

ekhosama said...

Hey u said one of ur favorite poems is sunlight on the garden.. Me too. I only have three poems using that rhyme scheme and one of them is called GEAR SHIFT. Check it out in my blog and tell me what u think.

Shirley said...

Hi Bob,
Very well put. Simple and to the point. You do know your flowers don't you? I'm impressed!
Shirley

ozymandiaz said...

I'd be a blooming idiot not to like this...
get it?
"BLOOOOOMING" idiot
jeeze i crack myself up

rch said...

Noah likewise :)

Yo ekho, I will check it as soon as I can.

Hi Shirl, what can I say?

Oz, lmao

Shirley said...

Yea Oz, that was a good one! Jeez, you crack me up too. :)

Gerald Galindez said...

i love the choice of words,

i love the radiance of a flower garden

bringing me back to an old experience
on a park....