Friday, March 21, 2008

Coast

A river has no enemies
and likewise, no true friends
although it’s quite a mover
in regard to current trends,
reacting to a rocky bed
by gouging graceful bends—
obsessed with finding distant seas
towards which it ever wends.

6 comments:

paisley said...

ooohhhh that was clever... very clever and very well written...

noahthegreat said...

:D

Gerald Galindez said...

i see a youth undergoing the process of adolescence.

good job

Shirley said...

I have to agree with Paisley…very clever and well written.

ozymandiaz said...

Ah, water, so ambiguous yet spiritual. Me thinks this be one of your best sir. It carries your trademark brevity and wryness. Kudos.

rch said...

Thanks for the flow of comments, oooh that really was bad ;)