Friday, January 11, 2013


I'm so out of shape
a squishy white grape
or a rubber-necked giraffe
that's covered each day
with a bit more gray
and all I can do is laugh.

I'm so unprepared
like a blooper that's aired
or a stuttering staff
that no one will ask
to manage one task
and all I can do is laugh.

I feel as upset
as a whale that can't bet
on a lopsided graph
whose data has skewed
as life has ensued
and all I can do is laugh.


Jessica Theodoragoss Alspach said...

incredible is restless...

Iremonger Doorbell Pickens said...

beautiful metaphors with strong emotions.

Anonymous said...

loved the tumble of images that your words evoked

Minn AlFrederick Romney said...

a hot and restless image created by your words.

Silverfox PeruMalei Jolie said...

quite a tense piece.

rch said...


Aya Gugles Wilson said...

emotional word flow.

Justin Penter Wood said...

a powerful rant.