Sunday, September 11, 2011

First Response

The towers fell
we'll never quell
that frantic frontrow glimpse of hell

we beg our Lords
to smite 'their' hordes
with vigorously vengeful swords

but here's the crease
the pain won't cease
until we learn to pray for peace.


Neni said...

oh I like it... Nice poem... :)

madhumakhi said...

9/11 was a shocking thing to happen. I mourn with you.

Ravenblack said...

I agree with your sentiments. Peace is something that needs to be worked at, not easy after something so terrible done to the innocent.

Shirley said...

Amen to that! I hate to think what this country has done to make so many other countries hate us this much.

rch said...

Hi all, sorry had to take a day off after that emotional outpouring we call 9/11, I thank you all for your comments.