Thursday, December 29, 2011

Unhook

Relating thoughts poetically
to people raised phonetically
is harder than it sounds at first
they seem to be genetically
disposed to hear the worst,

for matter biologically
condemned to chronologically
decay will seldom think of time
or any other concept logically
(especially in rhyme).

2 comments:

Erick Flores said...

"condemned to chronologically"
it is interesting to read all these lines and see so many themes come across. I really enjoyed reading this poem "unhook." We all need to "unhook" from time to time.
-Erick Flores

rch said...

Well if you're going to write a lot you have to try to mix it up now and then, thanks for reading me :^D