Thursday, September 02, 2010

Subdued

I won’t forsake me
to join any club
I’ve labored to be
no, it’s not a snub

I’ll never disrupt
the almighty We
that tries to corrupt
the fatally free.

I won’t forsake me
so move right along
your chorus of glee
overpowers my song.

5 comments:

Dimps said...

"that tries to corrupt
the fatally free."

Nice!

"your chorus of glee
overpowers my song."

Wonderful...

Regards,
Dimps

Joey Polanski said...

Together, we

Are more then me;

But, through WE, I

Do fortify.

rch said...

Thanks Dimps

Joey:

We is OK
Me - who can say?
A group can be fun
If properly done.

:P

Jingle said...

club,
snub...

perfect rhyme...
lovely done!

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