Friday, August 14, 2009

Continuum?

I really hate
to calculate
the distance that’s between us
there seems to be
a galaxy
dividing Mars and Venus
and no degree
of astronomy
will cancel out compunction
so two stray spheres
can cross light years
and once more form conjunction.

6 comments:

Dimps said...

Wow!!

Thats the best way to appreciate this creation :-)

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

Anonymous said...

meumm continuum reading youumm.
Cheers Glenn

Shirley said...

Wellum... definitely!

rch said...

Thanks Dimps!

Hiya Glenn, hope all is well on your side of the world!

Thankuum youum Shirley

Anonymous Poet said...

Again, it seems have independently take on the same topic. I like yours quite well.

Here is my version http://anonymouspoet.blogspot.com/2006/04/circumstance.html

Lyrically speaking said...

Cool piece, glad I stopped by