Friday, March 16, 2007


I tried to pick
the proper brick
and stop a messy tumble,
but all I did
was run then skid
into a writhing jumble.


Russell Ragsdale said...

The tone, meter and rhyme scheme all work to make this limeric seeming poem delightful. Well done Bob!

rch said...

Hi Russell, thanks so much, I really appreciate that 8^D

ozymandiaz said...

Like a guy at work told me..."the way to really mess up is to try doing something". Now I'm his supervisor. Great.

rch said...

Haha that'll teach ya ;)

Thanks Oz