Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Grim Aspect

That blazing symbol in the sky
is much too bright to signify
my less than stellar escapade,
a banal blip obscured by shade;
unsteady temples sag beneath
the dimness of penumbra’s wreath.

5 comments:

Travis Jay Morgan said...

I see the sun
shining brighter
than the words I’ve
written down
suggesting its light.
Ah, a radiance
lost in translation.

ozymandiaz said...

Oh obscurity
A true friend indeed
As you will never leave
Me

Shirley said...

Well, it looks like you inspired the some souls today. Good going! Shirl

Crunchy Weta said...

I keep coming back and reading this over and over, discovering more each time I read it. Much as I would love to know the story behind it, I think its better not to!

rch said...

Hey great poems you two!!

Hey Shirley I'm happy to be able to do that in any way I can.

Hey Glenn, well if I'm being honest it's just me whining again ;^)

Thanks everyone,

Bob