Thursday, June 22, 2006

Foil

Inequity
shall ever be
a point of our existence
the ratio
of pain we know
depends on independence;
a lack of such
and every crutch
will cripple more than carry,
too much of it
and you’ll regret
each comfort that you parry.

4 comments:

Shirley said...

Well, I like it! Rhyme away! It's beautiful.

rch said...

Thank you Shirley, you are too kind.

Shirley said...

No, I'm not that kind, You're that good! :)

ozymandiaz said...

Pleasure and pain, to understand either you must experience the other.