I watch him struggle to deal
With the fact that pain is real
And all the inadequacy I feel
Comes bubbling to the fore
Until those droplets pour
From my own eyes once more
For I can clearly see
Not learning to leave things be
Could make one a failure, like me.
5 comments:
Sounds like the makings of an amazing song!
I think we can all relate to this one for sure. No one can put together a wise rhyme like you!
Hi Kristen and Carrie, thanks a lot, I will have to work on that. Hope you both have a fantastic holiday season!
https://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2019/01/the-window-to-world-on-life-of-poet.html
an interview is posted.
Thanks alot, just went over and left a comment. My answers were pretty terse but I like to let my writing speak for itself. Keep the creative juices flowing!
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