Sunday, March 23, 2014

On the Rocks (again)

I thought that slab of ice
would escape the eddy's embrace
it twirled around altogether thrice
remaining in its place

but then I heard a loud ker-plunk
and listened for a scream
until I saw a heart-shaped chunk
go bobbing down the stream

5 comments:

Wildflower said...
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Wildflower said...

Wow this piece is amazing, the imagery is intense. I am a new reader and I have to say your art is beautiful thank you for sharing it with us.

Kate @ Another Clean Slate said...

Ahh I can imagine this happening... love it!

WordsPoeticallyWorth said...

An interesting piece that I enjoyed reading. Well done.

Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.

rch said...

Wow thanks wildflower, I look forward to seeing your namesake soon, and hopefully more of you as well :^D

Kate, thanks for your lovely comment, and I hope to see more of you also as well as

Andrew, thanks to you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)