Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Descent

When tulips stretch
to kiss the sky
even a wretch
as low as I
can bask in the redemption drawing nigh

a fertile time
to try and sow
before the rime
encrusted snow
will force all fleeting structures to forego

the budding plots
that garnered gains—
they took their shots
but soon the reins
are handed to those that raze the remains.

2 comments:

Dimps said...

Good pattern chosen Bob :)
These below mentioned lines are well-wedded!
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as low as I
can bask in the redemption drawing nigh

encrusted snow
will force all fleeting structures to forego

but soon the reins
are handed to those that raze the remains.

And ofcourse, I always love the subject you choose :)

Regards,
Dimps

rch said...

Thanks Dimps!