Saturday, March 13, 2010

Ownership

I fear this life is killing me
whatever shall I do
my body throbs in agony
from duties that I rue;
I tried the path of apathy
but never followed through,
was down with negativity
but that just made me blue,
surrendered to conformity
encountered nothing new
so tried responsibility
to realize my due
and now, this life is killing me
whatever shall I do?

4 comments:

Dimps said...

Hello Bob,

Best lines --
"so tried responsibility
to realize my due"

Simply Wow composition :)

It is such a deep thought. Keep up the good work :)

Rgds,
Dimps

rch said...

well you may not know that I own my own business besides doing my regular job too.

Dimps said...

Too good buddy :)
Talented !!

Rgds,
Dimps

be not blind said...

Really well written! Good stuff.