Monday, December 21, 2009

Salvation

Annoyingly the jingling resounds
as tawdry as the tinsel that abounds
but oh the warmth that loosens every knot
each time I drop some change into that pot
for maybe this old rogue still has a shot.

6 comments:

Dimps said...

Hello Bob,

Your composition is F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C
Your concepts, ideas and writing skills are simply out of the box!

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

Gerry Boyd said...

Nailed it. Well done!

Anonymous said...

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rch said...

Hey Dimps I have one question - will you be my agent?

Hi Gerry, thanks.

Anonymous I only have one thing to say - HUH?!?

Anonymous said...

Again a good post. Thank your also pen-friend

rch said...

well thanks anon