Monday, June 28, 2010

Reform


I saw something thrive in cement
it was quite a reinforcing event;
akin to a rose
with it’s own lovely scent
it proved there’s a flaw
in this unbending gent
providing enough of a dent
to find if life is meant
to sparkle, or be spent
(though it seems there’s nothing it can’t circumvent).

4 comments:

  1. Awesome poem with a perfect photo.
    Love it! :-)

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  2. This was a great poem with such a positive message wrapped up in it. Great work!!

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  3. Hi Carrie, thanks I was just disagreeing with myself ;)

    Hey Robb, thanks a lot.

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  4. Hello Bob,

    I really was busy with work and missed your compositions soooooooo much!!
    And after readin this one... I was so delighted... positive message, nice picture and great verbiage.
    Wow!

    Loads of love...
    Regards,
    Dimps

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