Monday, November 19, 2018

Schooled

I watch him struggle to deal
With the fact that pain is real
And all the inadequacy I feel

Comes bubbling to the fore
Until those droplets pour
From my own eyes once more

For I can clearly see
Not learning to leave things be
Could make one a failure, like me.
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5 comments:

  1. Kristen Hamilton3:48 PM

    Sounds like the makings of an amazing song!

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  2. Carrie Van Horn10:12 AM

    I think we can all relate to this one for sure. No one can put together a wise rhyme like you!

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  3. rch8:11 AM

    Hi Kristen and Carrie, thanks a lot, I will have to work on that. Hope you both have a fantastic holiday season!

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  4. Hyde Park Poetry Palace1:45 PM

    https://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2019/01/the-window-to-world-on-life-of-poet.html

    an interview is posted.

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  5. rch7:05 AM

    Thanks alot, just went over and left a comment. My answers were pretty terse but I like to let my writing speak for itself. Keep the creative juices flowing!

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