Your distant coldness
and stony silence
underscore the sky
with brilliant observations
(unless you're feeling shy
and cloak yourself in shadow
that we readily supply)
but soon you will turn bloody
when we happen to align
a sign we can't deny
of judgment from on high.
uplifting to us,
ReplyDeletea warm read.
Thanks again, great to see the rally back!
ReplyDeletebeyond average poem.
ReplyDeletewell done.
;)
life comes in full circles,
ReplyDeleteat times we are hit unexpectedly,
with strength and wisdom,
we can still see hope and smile.
shyness and open mindedness are both applicable to all of us.
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery.
I agree with Layne -- beyond average :)
ReplyDeleteapt verse.
ReplyDeleteperfect.
ReplyDelete;)
brilliant.
ReplyDeleteHey I'm a curious kind of guy and was wondering why most comment makers have like 5 or 6 somewhat unusual names and why their profiles are linked to the same pages?
ReplyDeleteOther than that thanks a lot, haven't had many comments lately.
First two lines were captivating enough that I had to read 'til the end. Ah sky and silence.
ReplyDeleteYou might also want to read my piece for Thursday poets rally!
https://fifteenminutesaftersunset.wordpress.com/2015/01/22/blue-is-the-warmest-color/
-allyson