Wednesday, April 09, 2014

Homesteading

Cut too deep
a scar is all you'll reap
your unproductive toils
in a lumpy jagged heap

sow too soon
and you won't have to prune
your estimate of spoils
as arid as a dune.

4 comments:

  1. I really love your poem. Especially the first two lines, they are so powerful.

    ~ Kim Graff

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  2. Brill! I wouldn't say that is average at all!

    From one poet to another -

    Liz
    http://www.lizbrownleepoet.com (A-Z)
    http://poetlizbrownlee.co.uk (website)

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  3. Thanks a lot Kim, liz, and cathrina!

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