I thought that slab of ice
would escape the eddy's embrace
it twirled around altogether thrice
remaining in its place
but then I heard a loud ker-plunk
and listened for a scream
until I saw a heart-shaped chunk
go bobbing down the stream
Are You Reading Me?
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ReplyDeleteWow this piece is amazing, the imagery is intense. I am a new reader and I have to say your art is beautiful thank you for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteAhh I can imagine this happening... love it!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting piece that I enjoyed reading. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Wow thanks wildflower, I look forward to seeing your namesake soon, and hopefully more of you as well :^D
ReplyDeleteKate, thanks for your lovely comment, and I hope to see more of you also as well as
Andrew, thanks to you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)