Sunday, April 28, 2013

Panache

Today I watched a raven strut
across a busy street
his plume still has a jaunty jut
though he's flatter than a sheet.

19 comments:

  1. nice - I dig that the Raven had such style - what a haughty bird eh?

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  2. Anonymous6:30 AM

    I love this I could clearly visualize =)

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  3. Delightful smiling crispness here - Great fun :)

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  4. Oh my, I take it the poor bird didn't make it. Sigh.

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  5. Awww...so sad. I guess the 'spirit' left in the raven despite the flatness, does show that life goes on after the 'physical' has departed.

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  6. Anonymous9:13 AM

    Oh my! Poor raven didn't look both ways! You captured him well in your words!Even the Breeze

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  7. Oh a splendid clever write - loved it!

    Anna :o]

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  8. I was smiling at his jauntyness and, just that quickly, as in life, he was flattened. Sigh. You made me see this so clearly.

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  9. All the taco sauce and mayonnaise he ate from fast food packets thrown out of vehicle windows must have addled his brain.

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  10. Love how such a short poem really gives us insight to the personality of an animal that goes unnoticed by so many. Nicely done.

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  11. This looks like the work of life at its pace on me when I'm drunk with words :D

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  12. Hahaha Good!
    ZQ

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  13. The raven quoth nevermore.

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  14. I came on the scene after the fact, all I saw was a dark spot with 2 or 3 feathers standing straight up, fluttering in the breeze.

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  15. Jaunty jut indeed they do! we have
    a local pair of brothers that call out, pretending to be offended & They call back and forth or simply harrang you for being outside with no treats!

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  16. Put a smile on my face although ravens and crows are very fast. I've seen plenty in the road, gathering carrion, but never seen one that actually got hit by a car.

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  17. oops - best to look both ways!

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  18. quite an irony!

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