A greedy aspen tries to hoard
the last few amber gems
but rigid limbs aren't suited for the task
and with no flashy trinkets left to mask
its flaws, discomfort stems
all showiness, till properly restored
by gold that glistens from the sky
for any staking claims
in hopes that it will multiply their yield
so skeletons can once more be concealed
by ostentatious aims
that haunt the insecure until they die.
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteThat second stanza is intriguing ~
ReplyDeleteWishing you happy weekend and Halloween ~
An interesting observation- I can see the stark limbs trying to grasp some glow......
ReplyDeleteNice imager and sound. This calls for reading aloud.
ReplyDeletenicely said... wonderful images
ReplyDeleteIntriguing words. Makes me picture the seasons in nature. :)
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ReplyDeleteVocabulary was enviable here...I am always impressed with your ability to rhyme without losing any sense. Awesome read.
ReplyDelete(My previous comment had a mistake.)
what an awesome, poignant piece!
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery...nicely done!
ReplyDeletevery nice indeed :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot everyone!!
ReplyDeleteThis is an intriguing form. I like the rhyme scheme and line length variations. You have captured the atmosphere of the season very well.
ReplyDeleteThis was great! Love the last three lines especially.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for always taking part in Poetry Pantry. I am late this week!
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