Monday, November 14, 2011

Big

The genesis is like a kiss
from sweet soft lips enticing bliss,
gestation starts and heart of hearts
begins to form its fleshy parts,
delivery is easily
the hardest step (it’s killing me)
before you know it has to go
and hopefully you watch it grow.

7 comments:

  1. How beautiful from genesis...to letting go

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  2. Very clever use of metaphor, Bob. I like this. :-)

    (I'm thinking it's about the creative process and sending the work out there to be read by others. Of course, I may be completely wrong in my reading of it.)

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  3. Bob,

    There is a feel of 'from little acorns, great things grow.'....

    A beginning and an end !!

    Best wishes, Eileen

    Thank you for your interest at my Blogs, Bob :)

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  4. Lots of meaning in this in so little. Very clever use of double innudendo or, metaphor.
    Nice piece. ;)

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  5. so many great lyrics...so good

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  6. Hi fellow scribes, yes it is a labor of love, but one I hope to experience again and again.

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