Friday, October 28, 2011

Alluvion

I pledge
this wedge
will never hedge
my need
to bleed
that’s guaranteed
for I
comply
with no one’s lie
no stone
or moan
will ever postpone
what seems
like streams
of dormant dreams.
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7 comments:

  1. Monika5:26 AM

    So loved it. The theme, the style, the words- perfect!

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  2. Unknown6:44 AM

    A lyrical piece illustrating your writer's determination.

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  3. Ella11:07 AM

    Well Done, the last line is so beautiful~

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  4. Anonymous2:56 PM

    i like the wedge concept and how you are pledging not to have block. a lot to live up to.

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  5. Poetry and Icecream3:10 PM

    This is awesome!!! I really enjoyed reading :)

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  6. Dave King1:16 AM

    I can relate to this. Congratulations.

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  7. rch12:42 PM

    Hi everybody, thanks for your kind words about my words :D

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