Venus was so scintillating
her radiance beyond debating
I cursed my craven hesitating
and cried aloud, “My Love!”
At once She started coruscating
with brilliance that was captivating
my pulse acutely palpitating
just like a startled dove,
abruptly I was levitating
my earthly cares evaporating
and soon I was cohabitating
with my brethren up above.
Are You Reading Me?
You know for a man with no education...you are brilliant in so many ways Bob....i to have no college education, but sometimes i feel like I have a PHD in the class of hard knocks....lol
ReplyDeleteThis poem is beautiful! :-)
Bob,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading the words of this poem. Very beautiful and had a feel of being taken to a higher level with a dreamy thought!
I must say that I like Carrie's words. You are BOTH great poets!
Best wishes Bob,
Eileen :)
There are times
ReplyDeletewhen all the world's asleep
the questions run so deep
for such a simple man
won't you please
please tell me what we've learned
I know it sounds absurd
please tell me who I am
Supertramp
Wow...!
ReplyDeleteHeavenly talks... Brilliant Bob!
Your compositions are fantastic...
:)
Take care!