Thursday, September 02, 2010

Subdued

I won’t forsake me
to join any club
I’ve labored to be
no, it’s not a snub

I’ll never disrupt
the almighty We
that tries to corrupt
the fatally free.

I won’t forsake me
so move right along
your chorus of glee
overpowers my song.
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5 comments:

  1. Dimple1:55 AM

    "that tries to corrupt
    the fatally free."

    Nice!

    "your chorus of glee
    overpowers my song."

    Wonderful...

    Regards,
    Dimps

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  2. Joey Polanski3:07 PM

    Together, we

    Are more then me;

    But, through WE, I

    Do fortify.

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  3. rch11:00 AM

    Thanks Dimps

    Joey:

    We is OK
    Me - who can say?
    A group can be fun
    If properly done.

    :P

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall4:41 AM

    club,
    snub...

    perfect rhyme...
    lovely done!

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